@StefanP what i mean is what group, what people are you trying to hook with your thesis

besides what you have told me about the thesis could anyone give me opinion on how i should angle this story?

@DanielleF thanks thats what i thought to but needed a second opinion to go with that idea

@ClaireR to be honest i had to shorten my so i wouldn't take up 5 blocks of shout

generation

Suicide and homicide are caused by depression and mental illness we need to check for these by screen testing for them and save our

@StefanP trying to reach

@Tori_Lemunyon making who believe and how the wrong use?

@carolinew shows good idea, topic and perfect for thesis but needs a better hook in my opinion

@carolinew explain a bit more in detail

@Ellie_D how is it a gigantic problem? you need to explain it a bit so that the reader with no previous knowledge can understand.

@DanielleF you should be a bit more descriptive

whats up people =)