@PaigeB that's a really good one, i don't know if i would ask a question at the end though

@Tyler_T i agree w/ alex. i believe you have a good idea i just dont get what you really mean, less smoking would loweer healthcare costs :)

@JenniferG pretty good it feels like something is missing

@StefanP i like you idea, give me a definition of pologamy?? so its more clear --kaitlin

@DanielleF why do you believe this?

@ScottB it's got all the parts it needs, but it could use some stronger words

teenagerss should have access to birth control to decreasse the numberr of abortions and teen pregnancies. --kaitlin n.

@Nicole_R your thesis is part of your intro. try to get rid of the facts and add more opinion

@JenniferG it's a good thesis, but it doesn't flow right

@Tori_Lemunyon it's kind of a long thesis, try to make your opionion more clear

@Ellie_D you could give some examples of what needs to be done, expand on what you said

, but I beg to differ.

Zoos are helping animals by reproducing animals and giving specialized care. Some people might argue that zoos mistreat animals,

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