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bene @leahs hah ok

bene and should no longer be opposed due to new understandings of them which destroy any opposing arguments.

bene revised thesis: Stem cells are the universal medicine that can treat just about anything and everything,

leahs I really really like this, and you.

Tori_Lemunyon BLUUCCKK....I think a certain someone is grumpy today >>>>

bene @leahs i know what it means but others might not

Tori_Lemunyon @StephanP i meant *don't look like that!!!!!

bene @carolinew oh ok thanks

carolinew @bene maybe you could add in the opposing argument, and then say why you don't believe it's true. It might make people relate to it more :)

ScottB besides what you have told me about the thesis could anyone give me opinion on how i should angle this story?

bene @carolinew so how should i change it to draw the reader in?

DanielleF @Tyler_T i agree w/ alex. i believe you have a good idea i just dont get what you really mean, less smoking would loweer healthcare costs :)

StefanP Angry baby!!!!!!!!!!

DanielleF @JenniferG pretty good it feels like something is missing

leahs @JenniferG Include what incentives the media would have for making stars do this.

ScottB @DanielleF thanks thats what i thought to but needed a second opinion to go with that idea

carolinew @DanielleF good, but not very passionate.

ClaireR @ScottB it doesn't sound so passionate. add some more emotion words

DanielleF teenagerss should have access to birth control to decreasse the numberr of abortions and teen pregnancies. --kaitlin n.

Tyler_T Americans should that smoking demand because this could benefit americans health and lower the cost health care. (Raymond)